For reading we have been reading a persuasive text about the Evil Drinking Fountain. We decided to write another persuasive text convincing someone the object we chose had a special power too. Here is my persuasive text is about the good pen.
The Good Pen
I knew the pen was good.
One day this pen was made for destiny! It would travel the world saving peoples lives. It turned up at our school. We saw Ethan using it at work finishing to mark his work off. I was playing with him later at lunch and suddenly he CRASHED on the ground and grazed his knee. A couple seconds later his cut healed.
Days past …. the pen was protected for those days, locked up in a cabinet with nothing in it. Just the pen. At morning tea I didn't finish my writing so I had to stay in. I opened the cabinet and got the pen out. I got my book and I did a couple more sentences. After I finished my work, I fell out of a tree and got a HUGE scar on my leg but the pen healed it right away. I wondered ~ how does the cut heal me when i’m far away from it?
One day later at reading time Cody used the pen for his reading activity. After school he went to SKIDS and fell off the flying fox and split his knee open with a big piece of bark but the pen healed him in 1 second.
Those are the reasons why I think this pen is good.